Today I finished all of my final edits. I am now starting to write my updated querry letter since I changed my publication. Throughout this process I have also noticed some strengths and weaknesses. Not only did I change tenses throughout the paper, I made it sound more like an advertisement than an informative article for a magazine. After fixing these things I feel my piece had a stronger voice. Another strength was my writing style, atleast my voice didnt change for the worst, it changed for the better. I also used an equal amount of heat and light so the readers werent bumbarded with my opinion or with too much research. Overall, I thought this was a great way to get to know myself better as a writer and I cant wait to read the finished piece to the class! After my presentation I will be posting my article on here so that you all can read the finished version. Thanks again for everyones help. Im going to enjoy the rest of the snow day now!
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